Many problems, not a bad idea
The storyline seems good, but there's just not enough action, Shadow Mario took Mario's star and you didn't even see how it happened. Many grammatical errors as well.
Many problems, not a bad idea
The storyline seems good, but there's just not enough action, Shadow Mario took Mario's star and you didn't even see how it happened. Many grammatical errors as well.
Fantastic animation.
This was a truly great experience to watch. Some of the best animation I've seen. Excellently done.
WOW
For a first clay flash!?! No offense Knox, but this was kinda smoother than yours except for some parts. Nice job, keep it up, maybe a bigger screen, more people and model them a bit better.
Good
I liked it, but let me make a list of things:
Positives: Violence, weapons and vehicles, backgrounds, sound.
Work-ons: The backgrounds are good, but could be a 'bit' better. When the screen goes black for a second, which it does often, I just dont like it. Length. Everyone enjoys a good violent movie, but with more of that, it will get better rated.
Good job
In case your wondering, I was the second guy who talked... ( Andrew ) yeah... I think I did a pretty bad job, coulda been better... Anywho, when the third guy said, " Master. " It made me laugh. I was anticipating for this movie to get worked on when I was over and it got completed. Now, touch up on your backgrounds, length, compress the music file size, perhaps some motion tweening, and you'll have smooth-sailing movies. Please continue.
Very Funny
This was a very funny, and hard-worked movie you put together. Ill be sure to watch your movies!
Age 32, Male
Flash Movies
Oshawa, ON
Joined on 3/4/06